Santa Anna-If you let me past this blockade i will bring peace
Taylor-We're just finishing up ending this war it doesnt matter
Santa Anna- I'll get them to surrender right away
Taylor-Fine
Santa Anna moves into Mexico City and makes a speech
Santa Anna-If you dont want to lose this War i will be your Commander
Citizens-Cheer
Arista-I step down
Santa Anna and his troops escape
Taylor-Drat i'm such a idiot
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1 comment:
This needs to be longer. You need to have narration and stage direction... great start, but more substance is needed.
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